heres part one
for over ten years i have been on a quest to find the
all powerful cheese cake lord, to defeat him and get my what is
rightfully mine.
i have fought army's big as the Deseret of meka low
te (made up Deseret) i have killed the gods of slang fine. and now the
real war will begin, now i shall fight the lord of cheese cake and kill
him to gain what is rightfully mine. and right a head of me was the door
to the land of cheese or called as utopia. i had made it to the door
and in front of me stood a monster made of cheese. i look at the beast
with great respect. it has stopped many that have tried to enter the
land of cheese. it spoke, saying" human go back or i will destroy you." i
yelled out " i will not turn back not now not ever"
the great cheese
beast scream" then this will be your end" the beast tired to hit me
with its tail but it missed. i stabbed it with my sword. he yelled in
pain and grabbed me. the cheese beast yelled " this i where your quest
ends "
he starts to crushing me. i began to spit out blood, he was going to break every bone in my body.
i look up and say the three words" vo to shang."
a
light came down onto me. the beast let me go . i was on fire. the
cheese beast said" how is this possible, your just a human unless you
killed the ten gods of the slang fine and took their souls."
i
dropped out of the fire with black armor. i have killed all of the god
of slang fine, taking their souls as well. with one hit of my blade the
cheese beast was destroyed.
i turn around and destroy the gate of
cheese. walked in the city and started to head to the cheese cake lords
castle. on my way i defeated millions of cheese soldier. at long last i
had made it to the cheese castle where the cheese lord lays.
i kicked
open the door and walked in killing every cheese soldier in my path,
until i can face to face with the cheese cake lord the cheese lord: "how
dare you come to my kingdom and kill my soldiers."i yelled at him "
your time is up now i shall take back my kid and bring her home" the
cheese lord laughed i throw my sword but he count it.
the cheese lord got up and said" if its a fight you want a fight you shall get."
i
ran to him with my other sword trying to cut him but i was failing to
do so. he count my sword and punched me sending me into a wall following
by throwing the sword into me stabbing me. i throw up a lot of blood.
the cheese cake lord told me" this is your end." i slowly close my eyes. is this it, where i die
but
what about my little girl, no i can die not now not ever. out of no
where a black light came up from the under world. changing me. he cheese
lord turned around and yelled impossible. one of my hand came out of
the darkness fully armored. then the other hand. i start to pull myself
out.
look at the cheese cake lord and stabbed him with my mind. he fell down on to his knees.
i walked to him with my sword and raised it. the cheese cake lord asked me to let him go, i just cut his head clean off.
i walked to the room where the little girl was being kept
but
it was to late she was dead. i fell to the ground on my knees and
picked her up. i carry her back to the city she was born in and she must
be barred in it


five days later
now that i had failed my people, i could not return
to my home. i had to leave my family behind. i have to find redemption
with in myself.
now i must find and kill the cheese cake king and bring back his head. that is the only way, there was no going back.
2
hours has passed and i get my first look at the wall of cheese. the
wall was grading the biggest cheese city of them all wrexx. no one has
made it through the wall. everyone who has tired died from the cheese
dragon. ever had been melted into grilled cheese(get it because the
dragon is made of cheese) i walked to the wall, the dragon came down and
said he has been waiting for you.
the gates opens and the cheese cake king is right their.
i start to run to the cheese king with my sword
but he was faster then the speed of light
he passed right by me cutting me.
i fell down on the ground bleeding out.
the
cheese king then comes back and stabs me in the back bend over and said
now this is you end. he kicks me to the ground and walks in the city.
there i lay bleeding to death, is this the end?
heres part two ^

now part three:the road to redemption
i wake up in a room that has blue lighting in it.
i sit up and a computer, next to the computer is an lady.
she turns around, she has blue eyes that glow and an old but worming face
she walks to be and say well its about time you woke up, a small robot (which is like a s amll helicopter in the air) it comes closer to me scanning my body with a blue light. the robot says "shes all ready to go." the lady says alright, she looks at me; well sona how do you feel.
i look at her scared," how do you know my name"
the lady says i know many things and all most everything in the universe."
i dont say anything, she pulls me up and takes me to a closet and tells me to get some clothes on. i look throw her clothes and chose some pants and a shirt. both of them had lines the going down them glowing purple. she hads me a blade and a gun that also glowed purple. she says to destroy the cheese cake king you must go the the flowing islands of titan. there you must defeat the five titans there and take their souls. i look at her and say why are you helping me.
she say "the cheese cake king has ruled for far to long and he must be destroyed before all of sora is destroyed."
there is a soul vine (kinda like a space ship/train but doesnt go into space)on its way to titan.
i say thank you.
she says heres you gear sona,and you pack with food, water and more weapons.
you quest is not over, it might even bring to fight the god of cheese cake in the future.
i say "why is that"
she says because the cheese cake king controls him and if you can break his link then he will be set free, now go the soul vine is here.
i hug the old women and run to the soul vine. get on it and talk to the guy on the ship in a different language, sor he dafh.(one ticket)
he says yu zom bo (here go)
the soul vine starts to leave and i wave good bye to the old women
she waves back and say good bye my grand child.

thats the end of part the the road to redemption
by the way sona is a girl.